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First edition:http://www.fannation.com/blogs/post/183816

 

Brian fired a shot backward as he ranthrough the alley.He looked back and saw one man fall,the others didn't stop to help.He heard shots ring through the air.They couldn't afford to kill Brian,because he had much information "Pyro" needed,so they shot at his feet.Brian peered out of the corner of his eye for a second and tripped to the ground.He hurriedly got back up,and another shot was fired from behind,and Brain felt the bullet graze his leg.But Brian ran through the pain.It was nothing compared to what he'd felt for the last few months.

 

(Flashback)

 

Brian woke up dazed and confused.Where was he?It was dark and one light bulb shown above his head.A figure emerged from the side of the room,and walked to Brian.He was fairly large,maybe 6'4,230 pounds,while Brian was a measly 5'11,190 pounds.He looked at Brian,and then strangely walked away and closed a door.

 

Brian had failed to notice he was in a small room,and saw what seemed to be a two way mirror.Brian ran to the door and tugged on the handle:Locked.Brian searched the room but found nothing.He started t panic a little.He tried kicking and striking the walls but it was solid concrete,and all he managed to do was stub his toe.He paced the room.He still didn't know what had happened at the resteraunt.Was his family ok?Where was he?Who was the man?Brian yelled for several minutes trying to get a response,before giving in and sitting down.

 

Finally a voice was heard over a small speaker in the corner he hadn't noticed.The voice said"Do you recognize this voice?"He could hear Keylee screaming for him."You son of a *****"Brian yelled"I'll kill you if you lay a finger on her!"The voice snickered and cackled.Keylee's screams rattled in his head.Brian screamed and yelled until he could no more.He had been in there for probably a day.He slumped against the wall.He passed out from exaustion,and for a time,escaping the personal hell he was enduring.

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